Year Three: 2270: Episode 4
Seven Words

 

*  Okay, so maybe I weaseled around a bit, changing the "seven words" and "fourteen words" around backwards.  But you have to admit, it does seem like something a good Technomage would do:  say it backwards, when discussing it with an EarthForce officer (even one as good-hearted as Sheridan).  I mean, why would Elric give away even that much about his secrets?  Okay, for one, it was probably metaphorical to begin with... and two, Peter David actually has a Technomage use the secret words to cause someone to fall in love "forever" in the Centauri Prime novels.  So-- I don't know.  In the final analysis, I needed more words for "leave without pain" than I needed for "fall in love forever."  If it helps Galen out of his pain, whom are we to quibble over word counts?

*  The Technomage particulars come mainly from three sources:  from Babylon 5/Crusade, the shows; from Jeanne Cavelos's trilogy of novels; and from my own extrapolations and needs for the story.  I tried to stay as close to established Mage canon as possible, but I was never 100% enamored with Cavelos's concepts of the Mages--as solid as her novels are.  But I love the Mages dearly, and hope I got them right enough for you, the reader.

*  Wikken and Darga are my own.  I purposefully omitted the names of the Circle members and leader, because who knows if the same individuals preside over the Mages here in this universe, as in the other version?

*  Avelar is mine, too, but now you know who he is!  

*  The idea of Dureena having a sword is JMS's, from the Crusade bible. I gave it a name, powers, a backstory, and a previous owner.  I don't know if JMS ever intended Dureena to become a Mage, but it's a done deal now!  

*  Originally I had Aveling state that Dureena found him at the Well of Forever.  This has been corrected to match the events of "The Memory of War" from our season 1:  she actually found the sword in the lair of Genius Loci.  She was infected by the Tech at Avelar's tomb at the Well.

   


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